Post by chaostro101 on Sept 13, 2007 0:28:57 GMT -5
Um.....
I am not trying to put you down or anything, but if you are going to do a fanfic, then try making a good story line.Don't try and make a story that's all comedy or anything too out of the ordinary, add some drama, give each chapter a catchy title, add colors to the character(s) you will play as and if you are going to talk in first person like you did at the top, my advice for that would be to avoid doing it like that and do it as if you are talking about events that have already happened.Plus, check grammer, punctuation and spelling at all times.Is that ok?
If not then go ahead and do what you want to do and I'll just shut up about it
I am not trying to put you down or anything, but if you are going to do a fanfic, then try making a good story line.Don't try and make a story that's all comedy or anything too out of the ordinary, add some drama, give each chapter a catchy title, add colors to the character(s) you will play as and if you are going to talk in first person like you did at the top, my advice for that would be to avoid doing it like that and do it as if you are talking about events that have already happened.Plus, check grammer, punctuation and spelling at all times.Is that ok?
If not then go ahead and do what you want to do and I'll just shut up about it