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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2006 13:25:03 GMT -5
I haven't started it yet, but stay tuned I will be ready.
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 27, 2006 14:21:00 GMT -5
Ok, we'll be waiting! ;D
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2006 16:47:21 GMT -5
Here's the first part anyway:
Nintendo World
Introduction
I never thought things would be like this. My life was normal, but never peaceful. There is war, pestilence, hunger, disease, and anything else that made my heart ache or my stomach turn. However, my life soon changed when an accident occurred a few years back….
Part 1, Chapter 1: A Normal Day
I was just getting home from school when things went to the worst for me. A school bully, by the name of Michael, what else could go wrong?
“Well, well, well” he said. “If it isn’t Ganondorf2? Heh, heh, I’ll be having fun with you.”
“Make like a bee, and buzz off, I don’t have time for your foolishness.”
“My buddies will make you eat those words” he said in annoyance, “OK, boys, go get her!”
I was caught off guard, and out numbered. I can fight, but I can’t take on more then one person at a time. I backed away from Michael’s minions, but they kept coming at me.
Suddenly, a strange thing happened. There was no wind that day, but I felt a breeze behind me. I turned around to see a doorway of some sort. I was starting to get sucked in.
“What the heck?!” Michael said in shock, “What is that?!”
I didn’t matter, I was the one the one getting closer and closer to this door way. I tried out running it, but of no avail. The suction was so strong; I was pulled in and disappeared into nothing.
The door way disappeared as well, leaving no trace of my whereabouts.
“This is bad,” Michael said in fear now, “I’ll be in big trouble!”
He turned to his buddies.
“I don’t want you to tell anybody this,” he said “Nobody, not your friends, not your parents…Just keep quiet, they’ll think she got kidnapped or something of that nature.”
If only they knew what happened to me. If only they knew…I’d get even with them someday. But first, what was that doorway? Why did it take me and not the others? Well, the rest is history. As I will tell you the rest of the story, don’t think I’m lucky I lived to tell about it. Lets just say faith was with me, and as I soon know, courage and friendship goes a long way.
Part 1, Chapter 2: A New World
All I remember is waking up. I got up and looked around. I was on a podium of some sort, but my eyes blurred still from the shock I had earlier even though I wear glasses. I saw bricks as if I’m in an old building. As I was looking around, I saw something that was familiar. As my eyesight got better, my eyes also widened as well.
“No way!” I said aloud, “Is that…the Triforce?!”
The triforce is said to give wishes to whoever touches it and is only found in the land of Hyrule. However, an evil man of the desert, by the name of Ganondorf, tried to claim it. He failed however, and only got one piece of the triforce, the triforce of power, which is shown on the back of his right hand. The other pieces had disappeared out of his reach. He manages to take over the world and was leader for seven years…till a young man wearing green defeated him. The man, named Link, had the second piece of the triforce known as the triforce of courage. He also had help from a man named Sheik, but really was the princess of destiny, Zelda, in disguise. She, too, had the piece of the triforce and Ganondorf kidnapped her because of it. Ganondorf claims it is the triforce that helped Link reach his goal, but it was just courage alone and pure of heart that made him fight his way through. After Ganon's defeat, and his sentence to the dark world, peace was in Hyrule once again.
I was shocked that I was in this world, this Hyrule. I never knew it was even real.
“This has got to be a dream,” I say in disbelief.
I saw a doorway to outside the building and headed out. When I walked out, I turned and looked up.
I wasn’t dreaming. I was in the Temple of Time the whole time. I still couldn’t believe it, but had to except it as well.
“Man, talking about living in a video game. I don’t know where to start,” I thought to myself, “I guess I’ll look around the place.”
I walked out into Hyrule Castle Town. The place was bustling with people, trying to get the best sales they could afford, kids playing tag while their parents talked and gabbed, it was a very lively place.
I walked around town and all I felt was a sharp pain on my ankle. A small white dog had bitten me there.
“Ow! Let go, dog!” I cried in pain.
A woman, about late thirties-early forties, rushed over and helped me with the dog.
“I’m so sorry,” she said, “My little Archie tends to do that with strangers, I’m trying to train him not to do that, but nothing worked.”
“Thanks miss, and I hope I didn’t waste your time.”
“Not another word.”
She got a better look at me.
“You’re not from here are you?” she asked.
“No, I’m not.”
“Oh dear,” she said with worry, “You’d best be careful outside this town.”
“Why’s that, miss?”
“The king of thieves had just escaped his darkened grave.”
“I’m sorry, I don’t quite follow you,” I lied, as I knew who it would be.
“Ever hear of the King of Evil, Ganondorf?”
“Only rumours,” I lied again.
“Do not get close to him. His hunger for power knows no bounds, it’s best to stay away unless you have a death wish.”
“Thanks for the warning, but what does he look like?”
“He wears dark armour and owns a black Gerudo horse. You can’t miss that.”
“Thanks again, I’ll stay away from him.” I finally say before I walk off.
I walked out into Hyrule Field, and I knew where everything is, but however, did not know where to start. I knew one thing, it was going to be long few days ahead of me, just walking around and not being in a car like the old days. I headed to Kakariko Village, sense it’s not far from where I am.
When I got there, it was the opposite of Hyrule Castle Town. It was peaceful and quiet…or so I thought for a little while.
(What do you think?)
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 27, 2006 17:14:28 GMT -5
Love it, love it, LOVE IT!! This is really good! I'm hyped! I'll be waiting for the next part! ;D
By the way, have you ever considered posting it somewhere? Fanfiction.net is a great place to start.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2006 18:12:14 GMT -5
Geeze, that's a first! I'm not sure if I want to go there. You had problems before, and I don't want to run into the same thing you did. Anyway, that part took me a while to do. So it might take even longer for the other parts...
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 27, 2006 19:06:07 GMT -5
Thats ok. If your talking about flames, just explain in the Authors note what you did different and why. Most of the time, people understand that and you'll get great reviews. However, if they still flame you, there's a respond button that goes with the review the person sent, so that you can explain what you did. If they still flame you, then you can block them from reviewing your stories. But you have to follow the rules at that website. Here are some examples they put last year.
No script format fanfics Review response in a chapter is not allowed anymore. There is a review response link for that if you want to answer questions that the reviewers posted. Posting music lyrics that you don't own is prohibited due to copyright issues.
Oh, and if you scream in your Authors Note, chances are that you'll be reported and likely banned. That's what happened to me because people never left a good comment on one of my fanfics. I shouted at them in my authors note, someone caught me, and I got banned for two weeks. It said something about 'Bad grammar, spelling, etc.', but I think it was because I shouted. I was let off on February 11th, though.
That's one of the things you should watch out for. Not many reviewers will like your story, so they put constrictive criticism or flame. You have to explain why you did something different to your story, and if they still don't agree, thats what the reply button is for on the person review. You have to make them understand that you did something different on purpose and that you might or might not be making any further changes. And 7 out of 10, they'll understand.
And if they don't and they still flame you, you can block them from reviewing your story. Here's a flame I recived from Cold Spirit, and I had to convince him that i did it on purpose. But then, he started a flame war with the reviewers that respect me!
Shadow Link 50: Omg, this is so stupid now. For one thing, Samus is a girl idiot. And... you made way too many near death things! Theres like 20 now, and to tell you the truth they don't have the same affect anymore. The first couple were good, but afterwards it went down the drain. Do something else man!
He clamed it to be constrictive criticism, but I took it as a flame. Then one of the members started a flame war with him, trying to defend my story. I reported Shadow Link, but the admins didn't do anything. But now, he stays away from my fanfic because of what happened!
Like I said, not all reviewers will like your story, but convince them to like it. If all fails, BLOCK them so they won't bother you! I have two people blocked right now for flaming my stories.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2006 7:16:27 GMT -5
I don't think I'll go for it. I rather post it here. Here's another part(I'm not sure if it's any better but, I tried):
Part 1, Chapter 3: The King of Evil
A guard greeted me while I was walking and I still felt this was a dream come true. Kakariko Village was perfect for lazy days. The windmill was quite a sight to see. I though things would be calm….
I heard a scream not too far away from me.
I wanted to help, so I ran towards the scream instead of away from it. I made a mistake, and I couldn’t see it coming. A man ran into me at full force. We were rolling on the ground until we ran into a building. The man laid face first on the ground while my back was against the building. I was dizzy from the accident, but nothing major. I looked down at the man for a second.
“Dang it!” I said in shock and fear, “It’s him! Ganondorf!”
He moved his arms and picked himself up; He too was dazed and confused. He looked around then looked down and saw me.
“Where’d you come from?” he said in shock.
“I’m sorry! I…”
Before I could finish he ran off. I followed him close behind, but realized my glasses were gone. As he ran, my vision became more and more blurred until I couldn’t see him at all. I looked around, but he was gone completely.
“Darn it! Where’d he go?” I said in frustration.
A guard ran up to me.
“Are you alright, miss?” he asked.
“Kind of,” I replied, “I don’t know what just happened.”
Another guard appeared.
“What happened, sir?” he asked.
“Ganondorf, that’s what!” the other said “Find that man at once!”
“Yes, sir!”
“I ran into him, sir. It’s my fault,” I said with shame.
“Don’t blame yourself, young lady. You thought you were doing the right thing,” he said, then smiled, “And in a way, you did. You slowed him down.”
I doubted it. Ganondorf must weigh at least two hundred to three hundred pounds of sheer muscle and power, although, I did give him a shock. It didn’t matter, my glasses were missing and I’m now handicapped because of my sight is blurred. I looked along the ground, but they were nowhere to be seen. Then something came to me, could it be possible that my glasses got hooked to Ganondorf’s armour some how? I wasn’t sure so I decided to head outside to see he might have dropped them by mistake. Just barely, on my right, I saw a large four-legged animal as I came out of the village.
“What is that?” I thought and approached slowly.
My sight got sharper as I got close. It was a black horse, the same horse the women described. It didn’t like the looks of me, so it backed away.
“It’s OK, I won’t hurt you,” I say with a calm tone.
It still wasn’t sure, but approached me with curiosity. I had my hands open showing that I wasn’t going to hurt it.
“It’s alright now,” I say rubbing its red mane.
I look at all the equipment that it was carrying, but no glasses.
“He must still have them,” I thought.
“You again.”
I turn quickly when I heard a deep toned voice.
“Who’s there?” I ask in fright.
I saw a dark figure standing on an old bridge. The figure got closer and a chill went down my spine. It was Ganondorf and he wasn’t a happy camper.
“How dare you get in my way,” he said in anger.
He walked slowly up to me and he was mad. Those arms could tare me limb from limb.
“Please, I didn’t mean to!” I say in fear and slowly backing away “It was an accident!”
He soon grabbed me by my neck and lifted me into the air.
“Please! Truly, I didn’t…”
“Silence!” he shouted at me.
I go quiet.
“First things first, why were you near my horse?” he asked, now in a calm tone, then… “Answer me!”
“My glasses, I was looking for them!”
“You wear glasses?” he scoffed.
I was getting annoyed a little.
“You’re handicapped, girl. And yet you went to look around for something you don’t have!” he says putting my back against the wall.
“No, I’m not lying, I was…”
I spot my glasses, on Ganondorf’s armoured collar. And he didn’t even know they were there.
“My glasses!”
Ganondorf was now confused.
“What are you talking about?” he asked.
I point at his collar.
“There! Right there! Take your shoulder armour off and look!”
Ganondorf drops me on the ground. I stayed put, and caught my breath, until he found them. He did and looked at them.
“Great, he found them. He might crush them in his hands now.” I thought.
I was wrong though as Ganondorf gave them back to me. I was surprised that he done so. He turned his back to me and walked to his horse. I got up and put my glasses back on. I looked at him as he tightened the straps of the saddle, as they were loose. I walked up slowly to him.
“Th…Thank you sir,” I said in a shaky tone.
Ganondorf did not turn around. He was concentrating more on his horse then me.
“I’m sorry about earlier. I didn’t know you were…” I was soon cut off as Ganondorf puts one finger up to silence me.
Ganondorf turns to me.
“Listen, you don’t have apologize to me,” he says, “Although, there’s a couple of things. One: You approached my horse with no fear. And second: You spoke the truth.”
I was confused. “What do you mean? Do people lie to you all the time?”
“Yes, and no.” he replied.
“Huh?”
“I’ve been lied to ever since when I was born” he continues “My dumb mothers didn’t help the situation any.”
“Mothers?”
“My real parents were killed long ago in a war.”
“Oh my, I pity you.”
Ganondorf was surprised when I said that and looked sight at me.
“Was it something I said?” I quickly say in horror of him looking at me.
“You…” he goes quiet, “You pity me? A lot of people never say that, but you…”
“They should, especially from my home, where war is almost a daily thing.”
Ganondorf was now curious about me.
“Where are you from?” he asked.
“Canada sir.”
“I need to get out more,” he soon thought.
“Actually, I’m not sure how I got here,” I admitted.
“What do you mean?”
I explained what happened to me earlier. I notice that Ganondorf was listening to my every word.
“Hmm, very interesting,” he said. “What’s your name?”
“Ganondorf2”
“OK, maybe later, you can help me a little, to pass the time.”
“Help you?” I got nervous after I said that.
“Yes,” he said, “And it’s very simple. You will be my messenger for a little while.”
“What’s that?”
“Under my command, I will give you letter or notes to different people in different places, it’s simple like I said.”
“You’re not trying to trick me are you?”
“No, no, no. I’m being honest here.”
I still wasn’t sure.
“Uh, I’ll think about it,” I soon say.
“Take your time,” Ganondorf replies.
He gets on his horse.
“Give me your answer tomorrow and maybe tell you a little more of what to do. Then maybe I'll help you get back to your world.”
His horse kicks its front legs up in the air, and then he rides off and disappears.
A messenger, I guess I was the only one who he can rely on at this time. I walked back into town more then just confused. All sorts of question flowed into my head like crazy. What does that guy want with me? I still don’t believe he wants to make a messenger, I still think it’s a trap. And help me? There's a laugh in a half. As I walked back, a guard ran up to me.
“Miss, I was looking all over for you,” he said.
“I’m sorry, I just went out to some get fresh air,” I lied.
“Well, I was sent to tell you that one of our stronger knights is coming to talk to you. He helped us many times before and I’m sure he’ll help you as well.”
“Thank you very much,” I say in relief. “I’ll speak to him as soon as he gets here.”
I did guess who it would be, but like Ganondorf he’s a nomad so I had no idea who it would be. Once again I was wrong.
(How about it?)
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 28, 2006 7:29:16 GMT -5
Excellent! This is getting good!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2006 9:11:45 GMT -5
Part 1, Chapter 4: The Hero of Time’s Plead
I thought this day was never going to end. As day slowly turned into night, I sat near the entrance to the graveyard and questions still flowed like a river into my mind. What does he want with me? He wants to help me, but why? Is it something he wants? My home…Does he want to conquer it? Yeah, right. I’ll be surprised if he tried and lived to tell about it, with all our weapons and such.
I got up and walked into the graveyard still with questions in my head. You might think graveyards are scary and I’ve gone nuts to even step foot in one, but I don’t care what they say. I’ll go where I want to, unless something is truly dangerous.
I walked over to a corner in the graveyard and sat there out in the open, so if the guard does look for me here, he’ll see me in plain view. For some reason, I started to get sleepy. What time is it? I usually go to bed around 9:00, but the time in Hyrule might be different. I found myself dozing off and finally falling asleep. Then I heard a man’s voice an hour later.
“Miss,” he said, “Wake up, miss”
My eyes opened to the sound. That voice sounded so calm and peaceful. But, I felt a little fear too, why I did not know.
I slowly opened my eyes completely, and I saw two leather boots sense my head was down. A belt held up the boots somewhat tightly. As I looked up, I saw the green tunic he was wearing. It’s the hero of time, Link!
“Link!” I thought excitedly, “Wow, is that what they meant? When did he come back to Hyrule? Didn’t he leave for Termina years ago?”
Link knelt down to see me. That golden blonde hair and ocean blue eyes really got to me. He is so handsome. I felt I was going to fall in love, but I snapped out of it. This is no time to take a love struck whiff. Now what does he want to talk to me about?
“I’m sorry if I disturbed you.” Link said, “My name is Link, I was sent to talk to you.”
“Are you the guard the others were talking about?” I ask as I got up.
Compared to me, Link I would say is at least an inch shorter then I am, which is not much considering because I’m tall anyway.
“You must have heard me coming,” he said. “Now what do you want to talk to me about?” I asked.
“I want you to tell me about the incident you had earlier. From what information I got, you ran into Ganondorf correct?”
“Yes.”
“Did he try to hurt you?”
“No, he was in shock though.”
“Excuse me, what do you mean?”
I explained about the hit and run I had earlier in the day.
“Did he say anything?”
“He asked “Where’d you come from?” before he ran off.”
I continued my story right to the time Ganondorf wanted me to help him. Link rubbed his face with his left hand.
“Hmm, this is mysterious.”
“So what should I do? People say he’s dangerous and I’m not sure if he’s going to hurt me.”
“I say take the job.”
I jump back. Has he lost it?
“Are you…?”
“I need someone to get info in Gerudo Valley and Gerudo Fortress.”
“But, why me?”
“Ganondorf asked you to the job didn’t he? For some reason Ganondorf hasn’t been trying anything serious and we want to know why.”
“Uh…wouldn’t that be a bad thing to do? He’s not causing trouble, I mean why do you want me to do this when he’s not doing anything?”
“One: He wants you to see him. Two: We tried many other women to join his tribe, but Ganondorf rejected them all. And three: You are only one to get in there.
“Dang,” I thought, “This can’t be happening.”
“I want to see if you can get in there.”
“OK, but where is this Gerudo Valley and this Gerudo Fortress anyway?
“I’m going to give you a ride on my horse on that day so don’t worry about it. Talk to one of my friends if you have the date you’re going for the job.”
“Got it! I’ll tell him I’ll take the job. I meet up with him tomorrow so I’ll tell the guards when the job starts at that day.”
“Good. I’ll tell the king about this for now. You get some rest you need it for tomorrow.”
“Thanks, Link, I’ll need it.”
Link soon left. I was on my own and I had to find a place for the night. As I walked through the village I saw the stars above the sky, the wind died down, just a warm summer night. A women saw me walk by, looking around.
“Looking for something?” she asked.
“Why, yes I am,” I replied, “Know a good place for some shuteye?”
“You’re looking at it. Come in, sit down and relax.”
“Thank you, you’re too kind.”
The women took me in and gave me something to eat. I felt guilty about it, but she insisted. I managed to get some sleep that night, but I was nervous about tomorrow.
The next day, I waited for Ganondorf outside Kakariko Village. I soon heard the sound of horse hooves coming my way. It was Ganondorf all right. He stopped his horse in front of me.
“Hello again,” he said. “Do you have your answer?”
“I will do the job.” I quickly say.
“Ah, good. You will start it at 3:00pm. You think you can get there around 2:30?”
“All I can say is I’ll try, sir.”
“Very well,” Ganondorf says as he turns his horse around, ”I will see you then.”
He rode off. I rushed back in the village to tell the guard.
“Got it, I’ll tell Link right away,” he said.
Once word got out, Link appeared on his horse around 2:00pm with a friend.
“Hey Link, thanks for coming in such short notice.” I said, feeling a bit guilty for disturbing him.
“Not a problem,” he said cheerfully.
I looked at the man, also on a horse, next to him.
“Who’s your friend?”
“His name is Sheik. He helped me a few years back.”
“Is he going for the ride or something?”
“No, I just wanted to get a better look at you, ”Sheik replied.
I thought he was just kidding, but he turned around on his horse.
“Link, be careful of what you’re doing, don’t let anyone see you,” he said to Link.
“I know that,” Link said with a little worry, “I’ll just drop her off at the entrance then stay out of sight.”
“OK, I’ll leave you with that,” Sheik says before riding off.
“Let’s go, miss. Gerudo Valley awaits,” Link, says he helps me get on his horse.
We ride towards Gerudo Valley. Maybe I’ll get answers there. Ganondorf is waiting for me, but things didn’t go as planned however…
(How's this one?)
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 28, 2006 16:27:03 GMT -5
Very good!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2006 16:30:57 GMT -5
Part 1, Chapter 5: A Mistake
Link and I rode an old path to Gerudo Valley. We soon got to the entrance, right on time.
“Good luck out there,” he said.
“I’ll try my best,” I replied.
I walked into Gerudo Valley with little fear. The place reminded me of the Grand Canyon as I continued to my destination. I soon saw a bridge that hung over a large river and on my left, a waterfall. Unfortunately, I have a fear of heights so I was a bit nervous to go across. I saw a female Gerudo guard on the bridge and was in front of a gate to the other side. I walked across the bridge, and tried not to look down, to talk to her.
“Excuse me,” I said, “Can I come through?”
“On what grounds?” she asked with seriousness in her voice.
“Ganondorf came and asked if I could take a job and…”
“Enough,” she said, “I don’t want to hear it.”
“What? Didn’t he tell you?”
“No, and I don’t believe he even met you. Now be gone with you.”
“This is ridiculous,” I say getting angry at the guard, “Look, I just want to…”
The guard points her weapon at me.
“I said, back off,” she continues, “If you don’t want to get hurt, I suggest you go back home. Besides, you wear glasses. Just take them off and you’re nothing to us. Now buzz off! ”
I sigh and walk off. I saw Ganondorf off in the distance looking my way. I guess he won this time.
I got back and told Link what happened.
“What? That dang guard,” he said angrily “She always messes things up for us. I’m sorry, if I…
“It’s OK,” I say blocking him off, “You never know what might happen.”
“Still…”
“You be on your way. I can walk home.”
“Are you sure?”
“Sure, I’m sure. I’ll be fine.”
“Fine, just don’t stay out here for too long.”
“I know.”
He rides off, still a little disappointed. I felt bad for him, but things are just not meant to work out for some reason. I decided to head for Lake Hylia sense I had nothing else to do. I heard galloping from behind me, and I thought it was just a person heading for the same place. I heard metal as well, which is odd.
“Hey, Ganondorf2,” a voice said from behind me.
I turned to see Ganondorf, on his horse, looking down at me. I was surprised he looked for me despite I’ve been assaulted by his guard.
“What are you doing here? You have business with someone?” I asked.
“Yeah, you,” he said. “Why did you leave my home?”
“Your stupid guard that’s what,” I say angrily. “She didn’t believe I was coming to your because of a job. I’m so ticked off.”
“Not again,” he sadly says.
“Again? This happened before?”
“No matter what I do, that women doesn’t listen to a word I say. She’ll boot anybody out for some lame excuse”
“Oh! I didn’t know. Why don’t you do anything about it?”
“I do, but her head’s up in the clouds most of the time. That women.”
I just shrug.
“Anyway, I’m sorry.”
My head went down, my conscience caught up with me.
“What’s wrong?” Ganondorf asked.
“You don’t want me, you might as well get rid of me.”
“Why?”
“Because a young man told me to investigate you.”
“A young man? Who are you…?”
It dawned on him.
“Wait a minute. Did he wear green clothing?”
“Yes,” I said shakily.
“I knew it!” he said angrily and slammed his fist on the saddle, scaring the horse.
I thought I was dead meat, but things were looking up.
“I’m amazed at you, girl,” Ganondorf said.
I looked up. He’s not angry with me?
“You told the truth. Then again, I don’t care even if you told him things about me.”
“What? Why?”
“That doesn’t matter right now. Now, I’m going to test your abilities. Here, take these two items.”
Ganondorf gave me a case what looks like it once held a dagger and a note.
“What’s this for?” I asked.
“Another one of my guards has my dagger and she has been gone for a week now. I want you give her the note and get my dagger back. She’s very friendly. I think you two might become good friends”
“OK, that’s pretty easy. Where is she going to be?”
“Kokiri Forest just east of here,” he told me. “Just look for two rows of trees and a sign that should tell you more.”
Ganondorf was about to leave, when I stopped him.
“Wait, where will you be at?”
“I will be at Lon Lon Ranch.”
He points at a building not far from where I stand.
“If you get the job done, I will bring you into my home, personally.”
“Yes! Thank you! I’ll do it.”
I ran for the forest. Man, such a simple task…Well I thought it was, but it was an ordeal as I found out later.
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 28, 2006 17:25:59 GMT -5
Still very good!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2006 19:01:57 GMT -5
Part 1, Chapter 6: The Dagger
I was very easy to spot the Gerudo Ganondorf told me about. When I got into the forest, she was sleeping on the bridge just in plain sight. However, I did not see the dagger on her.
“Excuse me,” I spoke softly so not to scare her.
She was out like a light. I had to think of something to wake her up. I looked at my hands for a second. My nails? What could I do with just them? I thought for a second. Not only can they be weapons, but maybe they can make noise too. I got down on my hands and knees and rubbed the wooden planks with my nails making an annoying sound. Her eyes opened. It worked! I continued the noise until she was completely awake.
“What are you doing?” she said, “I was having a good dream.”
“I’m sorry, but I was sent over by Ganondorf to…”
“Ganondorf? You’re not lying are you?”
“Would this be convincing enough?”
I give the note to the Gerudo. She read it.
“Ack! This is his hand writing!” she said in shock. “Oh no, I’m in trouble!”
“Something I should know?”
“Ganondorf wants me back at Gerudo Valley right away, but I can’t!”
“Why?”
“Look down there.”
I looked over the edge of the bridge and saw a small blade. I looked at the case and at the blade. That was the dagger all right.
“Let me ask this, how did it get down there?”
“I tripped when was about to go back home.”
I see another door just under the bridge.
“Can you get to that door?”
She freaked out.
“No way, I’m going down there!”
“What are you blabbing about?”
“That’s the Lost Woods! If anybody walks in that place, they will turn into a monster if he or she gets lost!”
I suddenly got scared.
“Now that’s a problem.”
We looked at the ground and noticed that dagger was at the edge of the bridge.
“Do you have a piece of rope?” I ask.
“I tried bringing it up with the rope, but here.”
She gave me a long rope. I looked at it and an idea came it me.
“Can you make a noose? On both ends of the rope?” I ask.
“Uh, I think so.”
She tied a noose on both ends of the rope and I tested the rope to see if it will reach over to the ground. It did, barely. I controlled the ends of the rope and hooked the blade and the hilt. Slowly and surely, I grabbed the dagger and put it back in its case.
“That never came to me,” she said.
“I try.” I simply say.
“What’s your name? I never seen you here in Hyrule before.”
“Ganondorf2, and you?”
“Ruby.”
“That’s a nice name.”
“Thank you, but I’m no gem,” she laughed.
I had to admit that was funny. I can see why she is called Ruby. She had a real one on the headdress that she wears.
“Thanks for helping me out. Now I can head back home.”
“No sweat. I might meet you there later?
“Sure! I can show you around if you like.”
“Cool. I’ll see you later.”
“See yah!”
She soon left the area. I had to get moving too. I placed the dagger case on my belt so it would be out of the way and ran out. I headed for Lon Lon Ranch, but something was off. One of the workers was running around panicking. I know him by heart. His name is Ingo. He once tried to take over the ranch when Ganondorf was ruler, but Link foiled his plans.
He ran around shouting for help.
“What’s going…?”
He ran past me. Actually, he did that many times. I’m trying to get answers and the guy ignores me. Hph, sounds like my school. I put my foot out and tripped the guy.
“What’s cooking?!”
“It’s awful, horrible, terrible…” he went on.
I was getting annoyed, so I gave him a slap in the face to set him straight.
“Speak English please.”
“Malon and Talon are imprisoned by Stalfos Knights in the ranch!” he sobbed.
“What? Is Ganondorf the cause?”
Ingo calmed down a bit.
“I don’t think so,” he said. “Because they captured him too!” My eyes widened upon hearing that. Ganondorf is on their side isn’t he? What was even stranger was the sun is still up. How in the world can they be walking in the sunlight? It’s their weakness.
“Listen stay here. I’m going in there”
“You can’t! It’s dangerous!”
“I don’t care! Three lives are at stake and my rule is nobody dies under my watch!”
I did mange to sneak in the ranch. I thought the normal Stalfos would be a piece of cake, but the real threat was right under my feet…
(Get ready, a battle chapter is up next.)
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 28, 2006 20:05:01 GMT -5
Awsome! I can't wait to find out what happens next. For the record, I'm not rushing you. A good story takes time, and THIS is a good story!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2006 20:12:30 GMT -5
Thanks, and just for my record, I'm a slow typer anyway, because I check for spelling....
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 29, 2006 1:35:23 GMT -5
You can always use the 'Spell Check' when your finished. That's what I do when I post my fanifc chapters.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 29, 2006 15:58:19 GMT -5
Yeah, but it sometimes still turns out wrong. Anyway I made some changes. I'm doing things in parts as well. Namely, ex: Part 1 Chapter 2, and so on. This is the last Chapter of this Part for now. But, I will continue the story:
Part 1: Chapter 7: A Battle For A New Friend
I tiptoed my way into the ranch. Then hid behind some crates and looked at the Stalfos very carefully. I noticed they were wearing some strange sunglasses. Was it those glasses that are protecting them from the sun by some type of magic? I wasn’t sure, myself. I looked at the dagger that was on my belt. It was only protection I had on me at the time. Looked over the crates and saw that Ingo was right. Two cages held Talon and Malon. A giant skeleton hand, however, was holding Ganondorf. I had to find a way to get to them a quickly and safely as possible. But, that thought didn’t last. I was found.
“An intruder!” One of the guards shouted.
The leader turned around hearing those words. He donned a black cape and the same sunglasses I saw earlier.
“Take no prisoners,” he said, “Kill the scum who gets in our way.”
He turned back and looked up at Ganondorf.
“Isn’t that right, Ganondorf?” he scoffed.
Ganondorf growled at the leader and tried to break free. He soon got tired from straining. The leader turned back to see if his guards are doing a good job.
I had to think fast. I didn’t have much time, but I got the dagger ready at any time. One guard looked over to see if I’m there and he quickly learned I was there, alive and ready to strike.
I stabbed the dagger in his head quickly. I knew that wouldn’t kill it, so I grabbed his sunglasses when I had the chance. I was right, by removing the glasses; it just turned into ashes when exposed to light.
“Gotcha!”
I grab more of the knights sunglasses sense they were in shock and they too turned into ash.
“Ganondorf2?! I can’t believe it! I didn’t know she could fight like that!”
The leader was somewhat annoyed by my presence.
“Oh, a friend of yours, huh? The leader said, “Well, lets see if she can handle this! Go, my men, get her and bring her to me dead!”
More knights came after me. I got ready to move in any way possible. They tried to slash me with their swords, but I had an advantage…I’m double jointed in the legs! I either ducked or jumped out of the way from each attack they made. One by one, I took their glasses until every single knight was gone.
“Make my day, squid face,” I say in victory.
The leader was now mad and stomped his foot on the ground.
“Feeling the heat? Because that oven is coming to cook your hide,” Ganondorf taunted.
“We’ll see about that,” said the leader.
I walked up into the main field where everyone was captured. The leader had his back to me.
“Turn around you coward. Thought you guys were tough, but you are so wrong,” I say.
The leader turned to me.
“You impress me,” he said, “But you can’t take this!”
The ground begins to shake. Lose my footing from the tremors and watch as the hand, that held Ganondorf, rises upward and is now an arm. Three more arms appeared and a head. It roared and pulled itself out of the ground. It must have been three stories tall! I never have seen a Stalfos like this one before.
“Kill her!” the leader commanded.
It grabbed three swords and swipes the air with them.
“Man, this is lame,” I think to myself. “How can I beat this thing?”
I get ready to dodge. The Stalfos used one of its four arms and sends the giant sword at me. I managed to dodge. Think, Ganondorf2, think! Then something came to me. Many people lose their focus if they get mad or frustrated. Ganondorf had done that once with the leader of the Stalfos. I wonder this guy also has a short fuse.
“You call that an attack?” I taunted.
The Stalfos looked at me in shock. It attacked again, but missed because I ducked.
“Fph that was so slow, a snail could beat you.” I taunted again.
“What the heck is she doing?” Ganondorf thought, “She’s just making it madder and madder…or is that the idea?”
I continued to taunt and tease the monster by putting insults, put down, slams or making faces at it.
“Come on, slowpoke, I haven’t got all day you know.” I continued.
The Stalfos had enough of me and used all three of its arms. It misses and gets its arms stuck in the ground. That was my chance. I jump on and ran up one of its arms.
“No, no, no! This can’t be happening!” the leader cried in disbelief.
I grabbed the giant sunglasses and took them off. It started to turn to ash, but there was a problem…I was going to fall to my death! Ganondorf fell first, but landed on his feet like a cat. I fell next and fell fast.
“Dang it! I guess this is my end!” I thought.
I braced myself for impact and shut my eyes. But, I stopped somehow. I opened one eye and looked around and saw that I didn’t touch the ground. I looked up and saw Ganondorf. He caught me in his arms as I fell!
“Nice catch…” I say in amazement.
“Thank you.” he replied, smiling.
The leader was scared now and tried to retreat. Ganondorf spotted the guy and his face turned to anger. He put me down and got out his sword.
“Get out of the way for a second,” he told me.
I backed off and watched as he got his sword ready.
“Boomerang Sword!” he cried and threw the giant blade.
It headed for the leader and chopped its head off. It looses its sunglasses as a result and turned to ash. The sword returns and Ganondorf catches it, putting it back in its case.
“Wow,” I thought.
The other Stalfos got scared; unlocked the doors to Malons and Talons cage and ran away. Talon wasn’t a happy guy for some reason.
“You brought those things to my ranch!” he said angrily “I don’t even want to know why you’re here in the first place, besides to cause trouble!”
“Please, I can explain,” Ganondorf, says as he tries to calm Talon down, but no avail.
“No, you listen to me!” Talon continued.
The argument lasted for several minutes, and now I was getting mad, because he should be grateful that he’s alive. I had it and blew a whistle out of my lips to make them shut up. Both Ganondorf and Talon looked right at me.
“Yo, you guys are wasting time.” I say finally.
I turn to Talon.
“Listen, you can go on all you want, but you won’t be getting anywhere. So shut your face!” I say and turn my back.
Talon was offended.
“How dare you speak to me like that, young lady,” he said angrily, “Your parents are probably born in some trash heap for all I care!”
I this time I lost my cool. I turned quickly and slashed his face with my nails. Ganondorf was surprised I took it that hard on Talon.
“You say that again and I’ll…” I go quiet, “I’m sorry, I need air, excuse me.”
I walked out. The argument was about to start again, but it ended a lot quicker as I heard a yell in pain. I turned and saw that Talon was holding his nose and Ganondorf’s fist had blood on it.
“You have no right to talk like that to me or her. Your lucky you’re alive, but then again I wonder if you should be.” Ganondorf said as he walked away and got to his horse.
I waited outside for him. I wasn’t sure if I did the right thing or made another mistake. Ganondorf walked out, holding on the loose straps and leading the horse along. He saw me sitting on the ground under a tree.
“You all right?” he asked.
“I am now,” I reply sadly.
“Don’t let it get to you. He was like that right from that start.”
“But insulting my family is way over the line.”
Ganondorf sighs.
“Come on, let’s go,” he soon says.
He gets me up on his horse then gets on after me.
“By the way, thank you,” Ganondorf slowly says. “Never in my life would somebody do that for me.”
I smile at him.
“Ditto to you too, big guy.”
He laughs. He gives his horse his command and we both ride off.
That so far these past few days was quite the adventure, but it’s not over. Yes, I made friends with Ganondorf, however that’s just one of many. I wonder what’s going hit me now? But most importantly, will I get back home?
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 31, 2006 3:19:11 GMT -5
That's very good! I can't wait to see what the next part brings!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Aug 9, 2006 18:51:21 GMT -5
Here's the first two chapters
Nintendo World, Part 2: The Team.
Part 2, Chapter 1: Messenger Mess Up
When we finally got to Ganondorf’s home and that stubborn guard let us through this time. No wonder. Ganondorf was with me and he cursed at her for making me leave in the first place. Anyway, when we got to Gerudo Fortress it was almost nightfall and I was tired. Ganondorf lead the horse up a steep hill. And before my eyes as we reached the top, I saw a castle right in front of me. I know it too! It’s Ganon’s Castle! Besides location, it hasn’t changed much sense the game Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time. Ganondorf slowed down the horse and got down. He gave me a hand getting down too, and he walked to his castle.
“Come on,” he said, “I’ll show you my humble abode.”
Humble? More like scary. The tops of the walls and towers had spikes coming out of it!
“Uh…”
“I know it’s intimidating,” he said walking back to me, “But I have no choice. Hyrule guards keep trying to capture me. So I made a copy of my old castle that I had years ago. It makes me feel safer…a little.”
I shrug and follow Ganondorf into the castle. The interior of the place didn’t change either. The doorway that leads into the tower scared me out of my wits! Ganondorf walked in the tower and I followed close behind. I don’t know how Link did it, but there was a heck of a lot of stairs that leads to main part of the tower. Then again, we didn’t run up them like he did. Once we got to the top, Ganondorf opened a wooden door, a small change in the place, for me and I walked inside.
Major changes here. The organ is still in back of the room, but a medium sized table and a large throne chair was there as well, hogging most of the room. Two torches were lit and brightened the room a little and I saw that normal windows replaced some of the stain glass ones. Decoration maybe?
“Nice,” I said, “You couldn’t ask for more.”
I saw three more doors. One on my left, one on my right, and one ahead to where I stand.
“Where does the doors lead to?” I ask.
“One of them is my room,” he replies “The one on your right. Yours is on your left.”
He has a room for guests? Weird. I thought he was always alone. I walked in the room. I can’t complain about it. Its got a desk, a cabinet, a dresser, everything. The bed was a good size for me. I walked past a large mirror and I looked at myself. Did I lose weight? With my height, my normal weight is 140 pounds, and I was a little over that weight a long time ago at home. However, I looked like I was 140 on the dot. Was it the battle? No way, I can’t get rid of pounds that fast. Ganondorf walked into my room.
“Well, what do you think?” he asked.
“Not bad, I like it.”
“Good. We will start your job tomorrow so get some rest.”
“OK.”
After I changed into a robe for the night, I went for the bed. The freezing desert night doesn’t even dent the castle and I fell asleep in the warm bed without trouble.
The next day, I woke up when I felt a warm breeze go through my window. The window wasn’t open before. What’s going on? I got up, changed into my old cloths and walked out of “my” bedroom. I took a peek in Ganondorf’s room, but I didn’t see him. I heard sounds coming from outside. I looked out the window and saw that Ganondorf was arguing with one of his guards. I got out of the tower and headed outside to see what’s the matter. When I got there the fight ended as quickly as it started. Ganondorf was mad and stormed pass me back in the castle. I don’t think he even knows I was watching the fight. I went back in the castle. When I got back up the tower, I heard crashing noises of jars or clay pots breaking. I opened the door a crack to see inside. Ganondorf was mad obviously, and kept grabbing and throwing things all over the place. I never seen I guy so ticked off in my life. He threw a jar at the door I was behind, and I gasped loudly trying to get away. He heard me.
“Who’s there?” he asked.
I walked out from behind the door, a little scared.
“I didn’t know you were up,” he says.
“I figured that when you walked passed me with a scowl on your face,” I reply, “What happened?”
“Don’t get me going,” he said, still mad.
I sigh and decided not to make matters worse for him.
“Anyway, about this job…”
“I almost forgot about that. Stay here a moment.”
He heads for his room then comes out a minute later.
“You will be carrying this bag while the notes are being sent,” Ganondorf tells me, “I got all the letters ready to go, all you have to do is deliver them.”
He gives the bag to me and I put it on.
“Got it, big guy.”
Something came to me.
“Uh…Wait, I can’t things done with just two legs. I’m a slow walker.” I say.
“Not a problem, come.”
We were back outside again. Most of the guards didn’t like the looks of me. Well, minus Ruby. Ganondorf lead me to a small horse stable. One of the horses was Ganondorf’s and it stuck out something terrible.
“You surprised me two days ago,” he said “You made friends with my horse so easily and sense I have nothing to do today, I’m going to let you ride her for one day.”
I was shocked and so were the guards. That thing is huge! Will it even listen to me? I don’t even ride horses. I did once or twice, but nothing like this.
“But, sir! I don’t ride horses that much.
“I’m sure you’ll do fine,” he said, “It just takes time, that’s all.”
Ganondorf helped me get on the horse.
“I’ll try my best,” I say before I speed off.
This is great! I managed to send the letters and notes to all the right places so far and Kakariko Village and Death Mountain was the last things I had to do. When I got to the village, I spotted Link once again. I had to tell him the great news.
“Link!” I shouted and ran towards the warrior.
Link turned and was surprised I was still around.
“Ganondorf2, how’s it going?” he asked.
“Good news. I’m in the Gerudo tribe!”
“What? I thought you said…”
“I know I did, but listen to this.”
I told Link about the day before. Link was shocked about the whole thing.
“Whoa, what an ordeal,” he said, “At least you’re OK. Wait, how’d you get here so quickly?”
“On Ganondorf’s horse.”
“What?!” he says in shock, “Does he know about this?”
“Yep. He let me ride it.”
“Ganondorf never does that. That’s so strange.”
“Anyway, I got to get going. Maybe you can cut my work in half. Can you take this letter and deliver it for me?”
“Sure. I’m going to be here for a little while anyway.”
I give the letter to Link.
“Thanks. See yah!”
I ran toward Death Mountain and had no trouble finding Goron City. When I got there, I was happy to see the Gorons. Man, making swords or bombs for people in the main land while they are up high in the mountains. Those guys eat nothing, but rocks! I think it’s funny myself.
The letter was to go to the leader of the Gorons, Darunia. I headed to his room. I saw him talking to his son. I stayed out of the room for now and waited for their conversation to end. Once the son left, I knocked on the wall to get Darunia’s attention.
“Excuse me, are you Darunia?” I ask.
He turns. That guy’s huge!
“And you are…?” He asks in annoyance.
“My name’s Ganondorf2, sir. I’m a messenger.”
“Oh! Come in. Come in.”
I walked in.
“I have guests so rarely. So what do you have for me?”
I give him the note. I was about to leave when he stopped me.
“Hold it!”
I froze. I didn’t like the tone of his voice.
“You work for Ganondorf?”
“Yes, but only for a little while.”
“You’re not leaving, till, I say you do! Guards!”
What’s going on? Gorons came out and took me away. They did however knock me out so I could resist capture. I woke up in a jail cell next to a gold and blue chest. I don’t understand. Just because I’m with Ganondorf you have to make a big fuss about it? I couldn’t do anything, but sit on the floor of my cell. I saw an arm besides the door in the cell. I got up and walked over to see who it is.
“Hello?”
“I see you’re up.”
Another Goron. And he is guarding the cell I’m in. He’s different from the others. He had a tattoo of the triforce on his arm.
“Please sir. Let me out. I did not do anything wrong.”
“But, you are with Ganondorf. Our enemy. He tried to kill us years ago. This is our way of payback,” he said.
“But, I’m also with the hero of time!” I reply
I spooked the Goron that time.
“Link? You’re with Link too?”
“Yes, I’m undercover. I go and get information for him about Ganondorf and what he’s up to.”
“I don’t believe it.”
“Oh yeah? Go get him and bring him over here then!”
“You’ll just try to escape.”
I get mad.
“I don’t believe this!” I scream. “Ever since I got here, people think I’m lying! I still don’t know how the heck I got here in the first place!”
“What’d you say?” the Goron says in curiosity.
I explain everything that happened in the last two days. And when I thought about it, I missed my parents.
“My, you went through a lot, missy.” the Goron said. “I’m so sorry.”
“That’s OK.” I say smiling.
“My names George. Maybe I can help you.”
“Please do. Ganondorf is probably wondering where I’m now.”
“Here,” George says handing me a piece of paper, “Write a note to him. May he will come.”
“But how will I get it to him?”
“Leave that to me.” He said smiling, “It’s almost time for my break.”
“OK,” I say as I wrote the note, “But attach this to Ganondorf’s horse. He let me use his horse today. It’s just outside of Kakariko Village. You can’t miss it.”
“I’ll handle it.”
I give the note to George. Just in time too. Another guard came to take over the post.
“OK, George, you’re done for the day,” he said.
“Oh, I didn’t think the time would be that quick.” George said, and then lied. “Just be careful, she almost attacked me a second ago.”
He left me to fend for myself for now. Will Ganondorf get the note? If he does, will he rescue me? I feel stupid now. But, time is the only thing I have to worry about now. And I don’t how much of it I have left…
Part 2, Chapter 2: Ganondorf To The Rescue?
I was stuck in a jail cell for over two hours, when I heard something. It sounded like an explosion. I walk over to the guard.
“What was that?” I asked.
“Not sure, but it’s not any of our business anyway,” he said.
“Smart mouth,” I thought.
I walked back and forth in the cell. Maybe he isn’t coming. This is not my day. Then I heard shouting outside. Is this bad?
“Hmm...Finally, something to get excited about,” said the Goron guard.
He went over to the door nearby, and when he opened it, somebody grabbed him and pulled him through the doorway. I was scared. I continued to hear shouting, but it faded quickly. I waited for a few seconds. Suddenly, a door was busted down. I hid for a second, but looked at the door as well. I saw a dark figure at the doorway.
“Who’s there?” I ask nervously.
The person heard me and walked up to my cell. It was Ganondorf!
“Need help?” he said with calmness in his voice.
“Thank goodness you’re here! You must have got my note.” I say.
“Yes, but how is another story. We must hurry.”
He grabbed two of the metal bars, which held me, and pulled them apart. I walked through the bars.
“I don’t say I owe you one,” Ganondorf continues, “Because it’s the other way around, or was.”
I chuckle. But, then, Darunia appeared at the doorway Ganondorf came in.
“Ganondorf!” he said in shock.
“Uh oh, run!” Ganondorf soon says in panic.
He grabs my wrist and runs out of the room. We managed to get to the core of Death Mountain when our exit was blocked thanks the Gorons.
“How are we going to get out here?” I ask in worry.
“You’ll see,” he says with no worry what so ever.
He picks me up and holds me in his arms.
“Watch this.”
Ganondorf starts to float above the ground. I forgot about that. The Gorons did too and tried to throw boulders at us. However, Ganondorf was rising faster every second then shot out of the mountain with great speed and got away. I knew I was safe, but my fear of heights was still there. I soon noticed we were being followed.
“Hey, Ganondorf, we got company,” I quickly say.
He looks behind himself only to see the giant owl, Kaepora Gaebora. He flew up to us. Man, this guy’s big too!
“Looks like I’m not alone in the sky, hoo hoo,” he said.
Ganondorf tries to ignore Kaepora, but the curious owl saw me.
“Ahh, you must be Ganondorf2,” he said.
“What the? How’d you know my name?” I ask.
“I know many things,” he continues, “I saw what happened earlier.”
“Can you…”
“I’m sorry, but I cannot get you back to your world.”
Dang! This is getting tougher then I thought.
“Hey, Ganondorf2,” Ganondorf says, trying to get my attention, “We are over my home now.”
“I’ll let you be on your way,” Kaepora says before flying away.
Ganondorf and I land in front of his castle.
“Thanks again,” I say, smiling.
“Why were you in Death Mountain anyway?” he asked.
“I had a letter that went there, why?”
Ganondorf looks behind himself in anger.
“Curse them,” he said, “One of my guards been doing dirty tricks again! You head for my castle for now. I’ll be back in a minute.”
He walks off. Do they always do that? Once I was back in Ganon’s Castle, I changed into a robe again and lied down on my bed. What’s to do now? I decided to forget about it for now and get some sleep. But the next day, I suffered Déjà vu all over again…
(How's that?)
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Post by The Melee Master on Aug 19, 2006 17:19:12 GMT -5
Great!! ;D Keep going, if you can!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Aug 24, 2006 16:15:35 GMT -5
Part 2, Chapter 3: Kidnapped Again
When I got up things didn’t change. Ganondorf got up earlier then I did and already left the building. When I got dressed and went outside he was waiting for me.
“Did you get your sleep?” he asked.
“Kind of,” I reply still with sleepiness in my eyes.
“I have a different job for you this time.”
“What of?”
“It’s just a small favour. I need you to got back to Kakariko Village for second and get me these supplies.”
Ganondorf gave me a list and a rupee bag. I looked at it and noticed that it is mostly on ammo, namely arrows, and bombs.
“I’m nervous about these bombs,” I say aloud.
“Don’t worry,” he said, “They only go off if you light the fuse.”
I was about to leave when Ganondorf stopped me for a second.
“About the other day, how’d you get that letter to my horse?” he asked.
“Would you believe a Goron helped me?”
“What?! How’d you do that?” he said in amazement, “Those guys are more stubborn then a donkey!”
“I guess I got lucky,” I say, “I made a new friend out of it too.”
“With the same Goron?”
“Uh huh!”
Ganondorf shock his head in disbelief. I left and decided to walk to the village. Once I got there I had to remember where I should go for supplies.
“Dang, I forgot! Where is that weapon place?” I thought.
I remembered quickly however and was about to go into the building when two Gorons suddenly appeared and ambushed me.
“Found you!” one of them said.
“Dang! I’m out of here!”
The Gorons grabbed me.
“Sorry, but those who are with Ganondorf are to be punished.”
“No! Stop!” I yell, as I try to get out of their grip.
They were about to take me away again, but this time I heard a familiar voice.
“And if you defy the King of Hyrule, your whole tribe will be punished”
“Link!” I thought, and then yelled the name.
Link appeared behind the Gorons and he was angry.
“That girl works for us. Let her go this instant!” he says in an angry tone.
“But, Link, she works for…” the Goron protested, but was cut off.
“She’s undercover! And if the King hears about this, you are the ones to suffer!”
They let me go. Close call.
“If I hear about this one more time….” he continued.
“No, you won’t sir.”
“Good. Now be off with you!”
Once the Gorons left, Link turned to me.
“You OK?” he asks.
“I am now. Thanks. But, how did you know about last time I was here?”
“Ganondorf flew past me, with anger on his face, that day so I knew something was wrong. I never thought he could fly that fast when angry, I thought I heard a explosion in the distance.”
I can’t believe my ears! Ganondorf can fly at speeds of over the speed of sound! That’s the sound I heard when I was in my cell at the time!
“And the king?”
“I told him, don’t worry. By the way, why are you back here?”
“Ganondorf asked me if I could get some stuff here.”
“Hey, I need to get some ammo myself, shall we go in together?
“Sure!” I say with excitement.
We went into a shop, called Bazaar’s, and got what we needed. I thanked Link again and left. I carefully packed up everything and walked back towards Gerudo Valley, but I was being followed. It was only Link thankfully.
“I thought you might need a lift,” he said.
“You don’t need to do that. I’m fine.”
“I insist. You had a hard time today.”
“It’s Ganondorf I’m worried about! If he spots you, you’re a dead man!” I say.
“I can take a risk. I won’t go in the place, I’ll just put you where I had you before.”
I just shrug. Fine, I’ll come with you. But I just hope we don’t get caught. Afterwards, I walked in and gave the supplies to Ganondorf as ordered.
“Nice job,” he said, “Was there any trouble?”
“Yeah. Some Gorons tried to take me away again.”
“What?!”
“Yeah, but that fellow, Link, helped me out.”
Ganondorf was now interested.
“Link again, huh?” he said.
“You’re not going to hurt him are you?”
“Not to worry, I’m just wondering what he wants.”
I won’t buy that. Not even for a million dollars. He’s probably thinking of killing him right this minute. However, he hasn’t tried it on me.
“You take a break for now,” he continues, “I got something else I have to do.”
As I head for Ganon’s Castle, I wondered if he was up to something. But the mystery was just starting…
Part 2, Chapter 4: A Strange Curse
I came back out of the castle, this time I’m going riding with Ganondorf on his horse.
“You ready?” he asked.
“Yep! Lets go!” I say with excitement and got on the animal.
When we got out of Gerudo Valley things were going fine, no problems. When an hour went by, Ganondorf started to get tired and sick for no reason at all. I noticed right away that something was wrong.
“You all right?” I ask with a little bit of worry.
He did not respond, just made heavy breathing sounds. Next thing I knew, he suddenly faints and falls sideways off of his horse. That spooked the horse and it reared up and made a cry of fright. Unfortunately for me, that sent me flying off of saddle I was on and hit the back of my head against rock, knocking me out.
I woke up, but in a new place.
“Now what?” I thought in frustration.
All I see is darkness and I couldn’t see even my hands in front of my face. I kept thinking that it’s one of Ganondorf’s tricks, but he got sick. I wonder what happened? I walked around in the darkness, and backed into something. I froze in fright.
“Who’s there?”
“Ganondorf2?”
It was Ganondorf, healthy at least. We turned to face each other. I’m still scared of him, not only for his size and strength, but that rugged look on his face, the “sunken” eyes, and those eyebrows. They make him look like he is angry all the time even though he’s not. That hairstyle is still…what are the words I’m looking for…well the jury’s still out lets just say.
“How’d you get here?” Ganondorf asked.
“I was going to ask the same thing.”
Suddenly a portal appeared. This one’s different. It started to suck me in.
“Oh no. Not again!” I say as I try to out run the suction once more.
The force was too strong by then and I was about to fly in the portal. Ganondorf grabbed my arm, however.
“Hang on!” he cries as he has a tight grip on my wrist.
Even those giant hands of his didn’t help. I was going to slip out of his hands, and he too was getting sucked in. He held on to me with both hands now and tried to pull me out of the suction, but the force was too strong.
“Let me go and get out of here!” I yell.
“What?! Why?!” he says in shock.
“Just save yourself! I don’t care what happens to me! Do it!”
This is true. Ever since I went to school I was either beaten up or bullied. Ganondorf now knows that I’m not afraid, not even if I’m going to perish I didn’t care if I’m alive or dead. He was about to let go, but Ganondorf was taken into the portal with me. Everything blacked out for a few seconds. I opened my eyes, got up and looked around.
“What was that all about?” I say to myself still a little dazed.
I noticed that Ganondorf was nowhere to be seen.
“Now where did he go?” I thought.
I walked around a few steps and ended up flat on my face. I tripped. I never trip on my own! Usually a bully helps me.
“Ow! What the?”
I looked at my reflection in the river to see if I damaged anything. I changed! My hair’s bright red instead of brown, my skin is tanned, my glasses or gone, and I’m wearing Ganondorf’s cloths! Everything else is normal. I tripped from the cape I’m wearing now. “Did Ganondorf…”
Then I thought again. No, Ganondorf didn’t do this. He tried to help me out back there. I thought he is supposed to be the so-called “King of Evil”, but I guess he changed. But right now, where is he?
“Ganondorf2?”
I heard his voice and turned, but saw nothing.
“Where are you?” I ask, still looking around.
“I’m not sure,” he responds and is echoing in my head, “This is not good. I’m inside of you! My soul is trapped in your body!”
I jump. You must be joking! How?
“Great…My life is over…”
“Calm down,” he says, “I’ll think of something.”
“Well make it quick, I’m thinking of drowning my sorrows in that river.”
“I think it’s a spell of some sort. Also of Goron origin.”
“Great…so what do I…er, “we” do?”
“I can’t do anything, but maybe Link and Zelda might be able to do something. If we go into the Temple of Time and wait there, we might get help.”
“But, what about the guards?” I ask.
“What about them?”
“I’m wearing your stuff and have Gerudo traits. They might think I’m there to cause trouble.”
“Actually, the guards might think you’re there looking for a date. It’s a Gerudo thing.”
“OK, I’ll go. All I got to say is that you better not talk in my mind when I get there.”
“Understood.”
I walked down to Hyrule Castle Town and then the Temple of Time. Inside the temple, I sat down in front of the Door of Time and waited. I dozed off after a couple of hours, but Ganondorf woke me up after a sound was heard.
“Ganondorf2! Wake up!”
“Huh? What?” I say still tired.
“Somebody’s coming!” he continued.
He was right I heard footsteps. Barely, I could see Sheik walk in.
“I heard something about a girl, in Ganondorf’s clothing walk in here,” he thought.
Sheik sees me.
“Hold on,” he continued the said aloud, “Who are you?”
“Don’t you remember me, Sheik?” I replied.
“That voice, aren’t you…?”
“Yes, I’m the girl that was with Link for a little while. Please help us.”
“Us? I don’t see anybody else with you.”
“The Gorons placed a spell on us and now Ganondorf’s stuck in my body!”
Even though his eyes were hard to see through with his long hair, I could tell that Sheik was in shock.
“Wow, that’s a first!” he said. “Don’t worry, I’m sure princess Zelda can help you. Come with me.”
I followed Sheik towards Hyrule Castle. Along the way, I felt I was at peace seeing the beautiful flowers, the cool breeze, and the birds chirping with happiness. Once Sheik and I got inside the castle, I was surprised how big the place was. Two giant doors lead to the throne room. Once there, I saw the King of Hyrule talking to Link.
“Are you sure of this?” the king asked Link, not knowing that I was waiting for him.
“Positive, sire,” he answered.
The king then focused on us.
“Sheik, what brings you here?” the king asked.
“We have a problem sir,” he replied. “This girl has a strange spell cast on her.”
“What kind of spell?”
“Not sure. She says that the Gorons have placed it on her.”
“But, why does she dawn the King of Evil’s cloths?” Link asked.
“That’s just it Link,” Sheik answered, “The spell caused both Ganondorf2 and Ganondorf to join together as one!”
The guards, Link, and the king were all shocked and terrified at what they heard. The guards aimed their spears at me and came up to me. I was scared!
“Ah!”
“Puts your weapons down!” the king ordered the soldiers.
“But, sir…”
“You heard the king!” Link shouted, “Put them down!”
They obeyed and I sighed in relief. Link walked over and checked me out.
“How did this happen?” he asked.
“I don’t know. It happened so fast. I was in the darkness, I saw Ganondorf for a few seconds then we got sucked into some doorway. He told me to come here for help and to look for a princess Zelda.”
“How did he talk to you?” Link asked, “I do not see him.”
“I heard his voice in my mind. You might not hear him, but I do.”
Link thought for a few seconds.
“Very well,” he says and turns to Sheik, “Sheik, ask Zelda to come to the throne room.”
“Are you this is wise?”
“I’m not sure myself, but go get her here. I think Zelda and I can handle Ganondorf if things go wrong. But, stay in her room. If things go wrong on her part and she runs back to her room you know what to do.”
“All right.”
Sheik ran up some small stairs. A few minutes later, Zelda came down.
“What’s the problem?” she asked.
Link explained to Zelda about the spell. I was worried. I wonder if the spell can be broken?
“I think I can do it, if they don’t mind a little pain,” she said finally.
“Pain?” I thought.
“I’m sorry, but it will hurt if I do break this spell too fast. You must have a little patience if wish to change back to the way you were.”
“OK…”
She raises her arms in the air and, in a flash, a lightening bolt of magic hits me like a ton of bricks. Man that hurt! The magic continued to flow through my body.
“You can do it Zelda!” Link shouted.
A small ball of light comes out of my body and I faint. I couldn’t remember much by then. I woke up and a nurse was looking after me.
“How do you feel?” she asked.
“Awful. My head is killing me.”
“You are not used to magic.”
“Kind of guessed that,” I say and look around, “Where’s Ganondorf?”
The nurse became nervous.
“He’s in the bed beside you.”
I looked at the bed on my right. It was him, all right. I looked my hands and noticed that this spell is broken. It was a relief, a big relief. Ganondorf soon woke up as well and put his hand on the back of his head.
“Uh, what happened?” he groaned.
The nurse was too scared to answer, so I answered for her.
“We are back to normal, big guy.”
Ganondorf looked at me then touched his body to make sure I was right. He was relieved as well.
“I’m glad that’s over,” he said to me.
“Tell me about it,” I replied.
The nurse was still terrified and ran off to tell the king.
“What’s her problem?” I ask, a little baffled.
“I have a bad feeling we are about to find out,” Ganondorf said in worry, “Come on, lets get out of here.”
We both got out of our beds and was about to get out of the room, when we bumped into Link and Zelda.
“What the?” Link said in alarm.
“Oh great. Link and Zelda’s here,” Ganondorf growled. “Get out of my way!”
“Not if I can help it!” Link said and got out his sword.
Uh oh. A fight is about to start, but I wasn’t going to have it. I placed myself in the middle and pushed both men away from each other. Thankfully, Zelda had the same idea.
“Stop it, Link!” she yelled.
“But, Zelda!” he protested.
“I’m sorry, but this time I must ask you to leave Ganondorf alone.”
Link backed off and puts his weapon away. I fell on the floor; tired from keeping both Link and Ganondorf alive. Although, if I did that again, I’ll be the one that’s dead.
“Thanks…Zelda,” I gasped.
Both Ganondorf and Link stared at each other with fire in their eyes.
“Ganondorf and Ganondorf2,” she said focusing on us now.
I turned to attention while Ganondorf just looked at Zelda with the corner of his eye.
“The spell is not completely gone I’m afraid, but now it’s controllable.”
“Controllable?” I ask.
“Yes,” she continued, “I cannot seem to break the spell as it is too strong for me to handle.”
“Then why are we back to normal?”
“I managed to change the spell a little bit,” she said, “I have made both of you able to change into form, but at your own free will.”
Ganondorf did not like this one bit.
“You mean to tell me that we are permanently linked as one even though we are separate?!” he shouted.
“I’m sorry, but-”
“I’m out of here!” he huffed and pushed his way angrily out of the castle.
Zelda turned to me.
“I’m so sorry, I tried my best.”
“Don’t take it too hard, Zelda,” I say with calmness in my voice. “I’m just glad I’m my old self again. That’s all that matters to me.”
“If only he stayed a little longer. I would have explained it’s just a new technique you two have now.”
“So we are not really…?”
“No, it’s something you will have to get used to though.”
“I understand. I got to get going. Thanks for everything anyway. Sorry if I caused you trouble.”
“That’s fine.”
I ran out of the castle. And tried to look for Ganondorf.
“Dang, where did he go? He’s probably still mad.” I thought.
When I walked into town, the residents were in shock. Ganondorf must have passed through if the people were so spooked.
“What happened here?” I asked one of the men that live in Hyrule Castle Town.
“G..G..Ganondorf just…” then the guy went silent.
“Never mind, I’ll figure it out myself.” I say with annoyance.
All this time Link’s been around, and they are still scared of Ganondorf. I went out of the town’s grounds and headed out. Since Ganondorf and I walked the way to the Temple of Time, I decided to walk back. However even though the spell, or curse as I like to call it, is broken Ganondorf doesn’t know that it is just a new move or form we change into if we are together. I had to find him and tell him about it before he does anything drastic. So I went on a search to see if I can track Ganondorf and explain to him. I’ll tell you one thing; he moves fast for his age…
(That's all for now as I don't know when I'm moving or something else is going to come up.)
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Post by The Melee Master on Sept 6, 2006 6:20:27 GMT -5
Very good!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Sept 12, 2006 13:39:05 GMT -5
In the next Chapter, Ganondorf and I go into our first, and only once, fight(namely an argument) with each other. Don't be surprized at what I do to calm him down.
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Post by The Melee Master on Sept 12, 2006 15:41:47 GMT -5
That outta be good! ;D
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Post by ganondorf2 on Sept 12, 2006 15:52:03 GMT -5
Part 2, Chapter 5: A Small Argument
I had to find Ganondorf, and explain about our new ability. So not to scare anyone, I asked the guards if they bumped into him. So far nothing came up. I was at a loss and decided to walk to Lake Hylia. I wasn’t sure about the latter that goes up and over the gate, but I went up anyway. Once I was at the lake, I saw Ganondorf standing at the lake’s shoreline. He didn’t even know I was looking at him. I walked around him and noticed he was staring out at the lake. I was quiet so not to disturb him, however he knew I was there.
“Ganondorf2…” he quietly said to me.
I flinched. I was caught. I had to tell him about earlier, so there was no turning back now.
“Ganondorf, Zelda tried her best to-“ I was cut off by Ganondorf’s anger.
“Don’t bring that up!” he shouted at me.
“Wait, let me explain,” I protested.
“I don’t want to hear it!” he said then turned his back to me.
“But-“
“Shut up!”
He swung his fist at me, but I ducked to avoid. Man, he really is mad. If only he would listen to me for a second.
“Stop this! I want to tell you about the spell!”
“And I don’t want to hear it!”
“You are so stubborn! The spell only works if we work together as a team, you idiot!”
“You little…”
He was really angry now. He tried to ram me into submission, but I was quicker that even he thought. When he missed, Ganondorf tripped and fell chest first on the ground. He was about to get up, but I pinned his back to the ground with my foot, grabbed both of his arms and tied them up in his cape. I continued to hold Ganondorf’s arms and pinning him down with my foot for now.
“Listen to me! The spell will not affect our lives! If you died, I won’t die at the same time or viscera! It’s just a new technique we have now, so don’t get mad at me blame the Gorons!”
Ganondorf soon calmed down and is tired from fighting.
“Just get used to it!” I get the final say.
I untie him and back off to see if he would try to hit me again. He gets up and looks at me in shock.
“Are you sure?” he asked rubbing his wrists.
“Yes!”
Ganondorf still wasn’t sure and looked away.
“You still don’t trust me do you? I’ll leave you alone,” I say before I walk away.
I walked across the two bridges in the lake and sat down on the pedestal there. I looked across the water. I’m not even sure I got through his head about the spell. I was quiet for a while, staring out at the water, looking at the schools of fish swimming around.
I soon heard footsteps on the bridge and looked at the sound without moving my head. Ganondorf…I thought he left.
“You’re still around? I figured…”
“No, I stayed back and thought about it for a second,” he said.
I felt guilty now. I don’t normally yell at someone like that.
“Ganondorf, I’m...” I begin to say.
“No, I’m the one who should say I’m sorry.”
“What?” I say in shock.
“I’ve been lied to for most of my life,” he continued, “These days, I’m not sure who to trust anymore.”
That sounds like my life.
“Gosh, you sound like you’ve been through my life only in a different place,” I reply.
“What’s that?”
“I had to take in the same thing. I still have some scars from most of the bullies that bothered me and lied to me. So I feel the same pain.”
“Hmm…”
We stayed silent for a while. What’s next? A Gerudo rushed over to us. It was Ruby too!
“What are you doing over here? Get back to your post!” Ganondorf said in an angry tone.
“I’m sorry, but there’s an emergency. One of our guards in Hyrule Castle Town was attacked by a strange monster there!”
“What?” I reply, “A monster?”
“Yes! It has weapons then even we can’t copy!”
“Sound interesting…” Ganondorf says with a sly look on his face, “I’ll check it out for myself.”
“What does it look like?” I ask.
“It wears armour unlike anything else. It hides it’s face and…”
She continues her description of the monster. As I pieced it together in my mind, I felt like I know this thing before.
“I like to see this turkey,” I say.
“Are you nuts?” Ganondorf protested, “You’re going to get hurt.”
“Last time someone said that, I ended up hurting the enemy more then they hurt me.” I pointed out.
“Good point,” Ganondorf quickly says.
“Lets get out of here.”
“Right,” he says before calling his horse.
We both got on the black Gerudo Stallion and rode off. Target: Hyrule Castle Town to offer assistance. When we got there, I was surprised to see a certain half robot-half demon, from a game Custom Robo, rampaging in the town’s streets…
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Post by The Melee Master on Sept 12, 2006 15:55:51 GMT -5
That was pretty cool!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Sept 13, 2006 13:45:01 GMT -5
In this one Ganondorf and I bump into Rahu a half Robot demon. If you never played Custom Robo for the GCN, I can show pics(if I can) of it and it's "stages.":
Part 2, Chapter 6: Rahu, The Demon Robot
It is one thing after another with us. We all rushed over by horse to Hyrule Castle Town to see this monster Ruby was telling us about. Once there, we saw the monster; floating in the air and shooting randomly at different things with its gun like weapons. Link had been shot too. His shield didn’t help I must say.
“Heh, too easy,” Ganondorf said, “I’ll get this thing out of here in three seconds flat.”
He was about to go after the monster, but I wasn’t going to have it. I grabbed Ganondorf’s cape and pulled him back to me.
“Are mad?!” I say, “I know that thing! Its name is Rahu, and that thing knows how to battle!”
Ganondorf was surprised that I knew the monster and its name.
“What?” he said, “Did you see this thing once before?”
“Uh, yeah, in a way,” I reply, trying to pick the right words.
“Then tell me how to beat this thing.”
“If you have a strong mind, I would let you in there, but I can’t.” I say with worry in my voice, “It battles within a persons mind and if you’re not strong enough, you’re a dead man.”
“Hph, that doesn’t scare me,” Ganondorf says with confidence, “It will be the one that’s dead.”
“Lets just walk up to it and see what it does.”
“What?” he says then thinks, “Alright, fine. But don’t blame me if we get hurt.”
Ganondorf gets out his sword for protection and follows me. We approach Rahu with caution. It continues to float and aim at different things, making sure there is no resistance with anybody. It turns, faces us and is somewhat surprised we got within firing distance of its weapons without fear. It said nothing when we continued to get closer and closer. The thing is small about the size of a 5 or 6-year-old child. We stopped when we were at least three feet away from Rahu.
“Alright, who are you and what do you want?” Ganondorf barked an order.
It said nothing.
“Uh, big guy, Rahu doesn’t speak.” I say, trying not to get Ganondorf angry again.
“Now you tell me,” he said in annoyance.
“Sorry, I forgot to tell you about that.”
Rahu looks at me with interest. It raises its left arm and looks like it’s aiming at me with its gun. Ganondorf gets ready to defend and lifts his sword up. It swings its arm away and the gun disappears from its hands and is stored into its arm. Rahu points its finger at me then, by moving that one finger, wants me to come closer. I wasn’t sure about it, but I walked a little closer to it.
“Ganondorf2…” Ganondorf spoke softly in protest.
“Just wait a minute,” I quickly say, before he did something rash.
I stood in place as Rahu floated up to me and checked me out. The town’s people were still hiding in fear. Link watched as Rahu floated up to me and looked at me eye to eye.
“You do not fear me…” it said finally.
It can talk! But, why didn’t it do so in Custom Robo?
“I am impressed,” it continued, “Ever since I almost destroyed the entire world of humans from a curse I had years ago. There is still someone who can face me without fear…”
It looks at Ganondorf too.
“Yes, even this large fellow has no fear to me.”
“What do you want?” Ganondorf asks then thinks, “A curse?”
“I’m looking for a new home,” Rahu replies.
“But, why attack the town to do so?” I ask.
“I was provoked. These humans, you call guards, attacked me.”
“Seems reasonable,” I say and soon realize that this guy is innocent.
Ganondorf soon thought about having someone new to Gerudo Fortress.
“OK guy,” he soon says, “Why don’t you say in my home then. That is if you can take the heat.”
“You would?” Rahu said in surprise.
I was getting suspicious. Ganondorf must want Rahu for something.
“By the way, Rahu,” I quickly ask, “How did you get cursed?”
“I was minding my own business as ghost when I got cursed by this strange sword.” Rahu replied.
“A sword?”
“Yeah, it had eyes on both sides of the blade and it was big and bulky.”
Ganondorf was in fear now. I could swear I saw him sweat when Rahu described the sword.
“Something wrong, Ganondorf?” I ask him.
“It’s nothing,” he said looking down on the ground, still in fear.
Man, he’s a bad liar. Something is off. At least Rahu isn’t as bad as it seems.
“Well, lets get out of here. I think this town had enough of us.” I say.
“Uh, yeah, lets go…” Ganondorf says, but is not exactly paying attention.
“You lead,” Rahu, says, “I will follow you.”
We all were about to leave Hyrule Castle Town when one of the guards ran in with panic in his voice.
“Link! Everyone! Two men are attacking Hyrule Field with a strange giant weapon!”
Everyone gasped and started to chatter about this. Link, still injured, gets up off the ground and walks over to the guard.
“Where are they now?” Link asked still in pain.
“That’s the problem! They are heading this way!”
Soon every town’s person, except Link, Ganondorf, Rahu and I, started to panic as well.
“Guards! Try to calm everyone down!” Link shouted.
“Yes sir!” the guards said and they scatter trying to calm the people as much as they could.
Link ran out of the gate into Hyrule Field.
“Ganondorf! Rahu! We can’t stay here! We will get killed if we stick around!” I shout.
One guy bumped into Ganondorf and made him fall. He quickly got up so he doesn’t get trampled.
“I hear you loud and clear! This is too much!” Ganondorf shouts in agreement, “Lets get out of here!”
We all ran out of the same gate Link went through. However what comes next, made people judge Ganondorf a little differently…
(Oh yeah, there are some Sega characters that show up too. So don't be surprized. In the next one, Ganondorf and Rahu have no choice, but to team up, namely Dark Formation, against the enemy. How'd they did it, I'll never tell.)
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Post by The Melee Master on Sept 14, 2006 16:59:29 GMT -5
Dang! Still, I wonder what's going to happen next!
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Post by ganondorf2 on Sept 15, 2006 11:46:16 GMT -5
Part 2, Chapter 7: New Form - Rahu Ganon
When we got outside things weren’t going well at all. The two men were using this machine to suck the life force out of living things! They aimed at trees, shrubs and anything else that moved or is living and breathing. We didn’t have much time before the men reached Hyrule Castle Town.
“Dang!” I thought, “I don’t want to get close to these guys. They might do the same thing to me!”
I looked at the machine itself and saw a jewel inside it. I felt like I seen it before.
“So these fools like to ruin the party, huh?” said Ganondorf aloud as he thought it would be no challenge to take out the weapon, “I can take that thing down with no problem.”
“Don’t be stupid, those guys look like they mean business.” I say with worry again.
“My scans indicate, that the machine has strong armour surrounding it.” Rahu informs us.
“Even better,” Ganondorf continues, “That just puts more meat on my table.”
OK, is this guy a daredevil or something? His attitude is starting to get on my nerves. He acts like he’s 12 years old!
“Lets go!” he says and runs towards the men.
“No! Don’t!” I yell at Ganondorf.
“This Ganondorf is someone I never encountered before,” Rahu said in curiosity. “Does he always act this way?”
“I don’t know,” I reply, “I just met him.”
“I better help him before he gets hurt.” Rahu follows Ganondorf after saying that.
Grr…Don’t they know danger when they see it? Out of all the idiots of this world, I get Twiddle Dee the Wonder Dummies. Once they got close, the men turned the machine around and shot both Ganondorf and Rahu with a ray of light. They collapse from the attack. Neither of them couldn’t move now, but they were alive.
“Dang it!” I shout, “I knew something like that was going to happen!”
Ganondorf was able to move his head however, and looked at Rahu who was also on the ground.
“Are…you OK?” he asked the robot.
“I thought…my life forces were…permanently terminated,” Rahu answered.
“I guess that’s a yes…” Ganondorf thought.
“I cannot move,” he continued, “What just happened?”
“I’m not sure myself. But, I didn’t feel anything when I got hit,” Ganondorf admitted.
“At least I have enough back up power to move a little, except I can’t go far with out getting spotted.”
Ganondorf looks at the men. They had their backs turned to them anyway.
“Can you get closer to me anyway?” he asked.
“I can try.”
Meanwhile, the men were saying something about the machine Ganondorf couldn’t help, but overhear.
“Man, this thing is awesome. Ever since we stole that jewel from that scientist, we are having a blast!” one man brags.
“Yeah, but what if an energy blast is too great even for this machine?” the second man asks.
“You worry too much.”
Ganondorf started to think. Rahu managed to crawl all the way to him.
“I can’t do much more. If only someone knew the spell of combined souls,” Rahu said in despair.
“What?” Ganondorf asked.
“I know of a spell that if two people use their minds and their hearts, they will merge as one and be able to do things they would not normally do,” Rahu continued. “It’s called Dark Formation.”
“Wait, a minute,” Ganondorf thinks, “Do you know how to do this Dark Formation?”
“Since everyone feared me, I’m not sure if it will work now.” Rahu admitted.
“Right now, we don’t have a choice.” Ganondorf continued, “I can do it, but it’s only been done to Ganondorf2, that girl that you looked at earlier.”
“OK, at least someone knows some of it. It might hurt a bit sense this is our first time, but I’m sure it will work.”
In the distance, I could see a small light. Rahu changed into a small spirit and entered Ganondorf’s body. All you could hear was Ganondorf moaning and groaning in pain.
“What’s that sound?” one of the men ask.
They look at Ganondorf.
“Heh, that guy’s in pain. He won’t be much now.”
Ganondorf screams in pain as his body starts to change.
“Can somebody shut this guys mouth?” one of the men complained while he shut his eyes and covers his ears.
“Look! That guy is…is changing!”
Armour starts to appear on Ganondorf’s body and a strange helmet attaches to his head. It covers him from head to toe except his mouth and eyes. He gasps for air from the pain.
“It looks like this guy still has energy left in him.”
The men turn the machine to point at Ganondorf, however he had disappeared.
“Huh? Where did he go?”
Link sees something is off.
“What’s going on?” Link thought, “Those men look nervous about something.”
I see something is wrong too. I look up a ways and I see a shadow of something in the air.
“Link!” I shout and point, “Look at that!”
Everyone in town did the same thing. Ganondorf was alive and is floating above the two men with new armour and weapons.
“It’s that guy!”
“I’ll shoot him down!”
They aim their weapon at Ganondorf and fires at him, but he dodges with great speed. He runs in the air and shoots a gun, with powerful beams, on his right arm at the men. The men duck and dodge the assault.
“It’s Ganondorf! He’s attacking those men!” I shout then think “With some strange weapon.”
Ganondorf fires missiles from another gun, on his left arm, hitting the ground and the machine causing damage. A machine on his back moves into position and fires something as well. Small robots come out and land on the ground.
“What the heck are those?”
They get up and walk over to the weapon and a timer comes up.
“It’s a bomb!”
The men ran as the robots explode, destroying the weapon. They look back at the now burning debris. Ganondorf grabs the jewel, which is still intact, that they left behind.
“Man, this could not get any worse.”
They turn to see the Hyrule guards pointing their spears at them.
“You had to say that didn’t you?”
“Shut up!”
The guards take the men away. Ganondorf walked up to us in a new look.
“Ganondorf is…is that you?” I ask.
“Yes…” he answered in a robot like tone.
“How did you…change?” I ask again, but a little nervous.
“Long story, but right now, I’m tired.” he said, “Anyone have a red potion on them?”
I try to get someone to bring a potion, but Link was the only one to do so. I give the potion to Ganondorf once Link handed it to me. He drinks it down quickly then sits down and breathes heavily. I tell Link to send everyone home for now.
“Alright everyone,” Link turns to the towns attention, “Show’s over lets get out of here.”
Link looks at me to see if I’m going too, but I shake my head. Once everyone had left, I turned my attention to Ganondorf.
“Are you going to be OK?” I ask him.
“I will. I just got to get out of this body first…”
“What?”
I see a bright flash of light and Ganondorf appears in his old cloths with Rahu beside him.
“What’s going on?” I ask in confusion.
Soon Ganondorf explained to me about the spell that was cast on us. For some reason, Rahu knows about this Dark Formation thing more then we did. We headed for home for now, with a new friend. However, the next day everything went wrong again and I spotted it before it started…
(The next one, introduces one of the characters in Sega. If you are thinking Sonic, no, it's him. Here's a clue, he's at one with nature, mostly he controls an element that we need to live. Oh, yeah like Sonic though, he's blue.)
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Post by chaostro101 on Sept 15, 2006 21:07:40 GMT -5
(Is it big the cat?)
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