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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 27, 2008 21:39:30 GMT -5
Another part of the ship breaks, and Vormen and Jackie jump out of the debris way. They spot an opening, but it was at the top of the ship.
"Find a way to get to the top, quickly!" the man shouts.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2008 21:46:35 GMT -5
"Ganon, try to levitate us all up there," I said.
He nods to this, closes his eyes and focuses hard.
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 27, 2008 21:52:10 GMT -5
Another part of the ship breaks and heads toward Jackie and Vormen. Jackie jumps out of the way and falls into the water. The debris barely miss Vormen. It crashes into the water, seemingly on top of Jackie.
"Jackie!!" I shout.
"We can't go back for him now." the man said, "Keep climbing to the top!"
Another part of the ship breaks and begins to fall. The boy suddenly dives in to avoid being hit. It crashes into the water, and he was no longer seen.
"...Oh no." Vormen whispered.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2008 21:58:21 GMT -5
I wanted to help them.
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 27, 2008 22:01:24 GMT -5
"Should we go after them?!" I ask.
"They're beyond our help now!" the man said, "And we're next unless we find a way to save ourselves!"
He tries to make his way toward the top of the ship.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2008 22:04:52 GMT -5
Ganondorf's eyes open quickly now white.
Everyone starts to float off and out of the water.
He looks up then flies to the top.
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 27, 2008 22:08:17 GMT -5
{Are you sure you don't mean water, not ground? Just curious}
Meanwhile, Jackie tries to fight his way out of the debris underwater. He starts to feel light headed. A shadow appears from the surface of the water, which looked like a long, water snake, but before Jackie had the chance to get a closer look, he passes out.
The boy, not knowing what Jackie had seen, finds him and grabs him, then heads toward the surface as quickly as he could.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2008 22:11:28 GMT -5
(Oh yeah, sorry about that)
Ganondorf continues to take us up and out of the ship.
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 27, 2008 22:14:22 GMT -5
We look down as the ship sank beneath us.
"I hope they're ok..." I said.
{I think we should stop here now}
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 27, 2008 22:16:33 GMT -5
(Yeah)
Ganondorf said nothing to this and stops flying at a certain hight.
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Post by chaostro101 on Jul 27, 2008 23:08:25 GMT -5
I followed with them thanks to my jet pack.
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 27, 2008 23:26:03 GMT -5
Melee Master also caught up using her jet pack, "Everyone all right?"
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 19:47:10 GMT -5
"We are, but two of us are missing." I answer her.
Vormen continues looking around, "I still don't see them."
The man clinches his fists, then sighed, "Let's just head back for the island."
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 19:59:41 GMT -5
Ganondorf nods, looks around, then flies us away.
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:14:44 GMT -5
Meanwhile, on another part of the island, the boy carried Jackie to the shore, and collapsed to his knees, letting Jackie fall to the ground. He woke up and lets out a violent cough.
"Glad to see your alive." the boy said.
"...You saved me?" he asks.
"Of course."
Jackie sighed and stood up. He looked out in the ocean, "...Did you happen to see what I've seen back there?"
"I did see a shadow hover over you, but luckily, I was able to get to you before it did, first."
"I wonder if that was Tikal."
"Possibly, but it was too blurry, so I couldn't see that well."
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 20:19:17 GMT -5
Whistling is heard a moment later.
(It's different character, don't worry)
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:22:44 GMT -5
{Ok}
Jackie and the boy turns to where they heard the whistle.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 20:24:31 GMT -5
A small boy, in a ball cap, is seen.
(Ness)
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:29:10 GMT -5
"Um...hello." Jackie said.
The boy looked at Ness and didn't say anything.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 20:31:52 GMT -5
"Hello," he said then takes a good luck at them, "You're soaked to the skin, what happened?"
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:35:55 GMT -5
"Long story." the boy said.
"So what are you doing here on this island?" Jackie asks.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 20:38:59 GMT -5
"I came here to check it out," he said, "Oh. I'm sorry, I'm being rude. My name's Ness."
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:46:25 GMT -5
"I'm Jackie." he said, "It's nice to meet you."
The boy didn't answer. Jackie turns to him, "You never really did tell us your name."
He turns away, "Let's head back and let the others know that your ok."
He walks away. Jackie grew puzzled.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 20:51:22 GMT -5
"He's hiding his name..." Ness mindblocked, "I think I know why... Are you injured in anyway?"
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 20:58:00 GMT -5
"Not that I know of." Jackie said, looking at his body.
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 21:05:24 GMT -5
Ness walk over and checks.
"Your arm..." he said, "It's broken. Don't you feel the pain?"
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Post by Shadow Dragon on Jul 28, 2008 21:16:09 GMT -5
"What do you mean 'broken'?" Jackie asks, "If it was broken, then yeah, I would've felt pain, but since I don't..."
{I'm stopping here to let everyone else catch up. And not to be rude, but if Jackie had a broken arm, I would've said something since he's one of my characters.}
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Post by ganondorf2 on Jul 28, 2008 21:34:09 GMT -5
(Sorry, I just wanted to show the characters Ness's PSI (psychic) powers)
"Don't worry, I'll fix it," he said and places his hand on his arm.
It glows for a second then removes his hand.
"How's that?"
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Post by The Melee Master on Jul 29, 2008 18:21:00 GMT -5
"I hope they're ok." Melee Master said, then she walks away.
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Post by chaostro101 on Jul 29, 2008 22:25:44 GMT -5
I was silent as I followed melee master.
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